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Stress

side step ole stress n cross the street, pick em up, don't drag ya feet, if love is there, it's all so sweet, but love is slow to find. right one, i've ever yet to meet... ensnare her heart, 2 be complete:) 2 be johnsons you'd delete, all old memories of 'pure' passion. Don Johnson
pure is in, Russells input....:) yep better!

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Date: 1/8/2012 10:02:00 PM
"all old memories of PURE passion" I thought I'd just insert a word! I liked it that way and just thought of it and thought it would be nice to let you know my idea! Oh, I don't expect you to change anything and I don't mean to suggest that either...it was just a fun insertion! Thanks for a great write! Awesome Work!!
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/9/2012 1:23:00 AM
Yes Russell i have added PURE...what about PUREST?....GUESS YOU GET 10% ROYALTYS :)
Date: 1/8/2012 8:53:00 PM
STRESS AT HIGH LEVELS RIGHT NOW LUV.. HAVE U MISSED OR FORGOTTEN THE "SWEETHEART".. HEALING FROM MY HAND SURGERY..OH///
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:35:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Don. Has a nice flow to it. Love, Kim
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/8/2012 8:36:00 PM
you have to be cute to be noticed ...perhaps?
Date: 1/8/2012 7:54:00 PM
That is very cute- side stepping cross the street- love it, Brenda : )
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