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Strength Prevails

Two stone pillars stand.. Reach into the blue Heavens.. Rage and anger fly.. Passion and love pour.. United and strength prevails.. Lives lost , not spirit.. "Remembering 911" contest written by Michael J Falotico

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Date: 9/16/2011 12:40:00 AM
Wooohooo, Michael. This is a big win!!! Told you so, this is a strong poem. Congratulations, dear. Luv, dinda.
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:43:00 PM
Creative winning work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:51:00 PM
Michael--Your title was the slam dunk for me! Wonderful winning piece. Full of strength and a future of hope. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/15/2011 3:54:00 PM
Many congratulations to you, Michael : )
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:51:00 AM
Well written and deserving of the win. Congratulations
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Date: 9/15/2011 3:16:00 AM
Three power lines one right after the other..."Rage and anger fly..Passion and love pour..United and strength prevails.." are my favorite in this poem Michael. Great job my friend. CR
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:09:00 AM
i was hooked on the last line, michael...sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Michael! Kim
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Carolyn, Michael
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congrats on this 2nd.place win we will always remember Michael.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:00:00 PM
Congrats Michael luv on your second place win .. phenomenal words express the horror of that fateful day ... well deserved for a well crafted write .. your Jersey Girl in happy mode of moving..luv..
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Date: 9/14/2011 3:56:00 PM
Michael, just perfect, beautiful. Congrats on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations Michael. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:51:00 PM
Michael congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:50:00 PM
Yep, not the soul spirit. A pleasure to see your entry rank near the top Michael.
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:43:00 PM
Beautifully written, Michael. This tragedy did unite our nation and although many lives were lost, the spirit of Americans could not be destroyed. Congratulations on your second place in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2011 8:38:00 AM
Love your series of remembrance here Michael, especially the second one.. Good luck for Carolyn's contest with this gem. Love Wilma
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Date: 9/11/2011 8:28:00 AM
this was awesome nicely done check out mine it is a note on my wall entitled 9/11 I would love to hear what you have to say.. cory
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:48:00 PM
VERY nice, Michael. Sure to place high!!
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Date: 9/10/2011 7:21:00 PM
another gem of creativity Michael luv.. excellent entry ..good luck in the contest luv.. these lines are super amazing .. as u luv..xoxo..J.G. forever and always.. xoxo.
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:26:00 PM
Wow...what you don't say here...I hear! Great job! CR
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Date: 9/10/2011 12:58:00 PM
I loved this one, Michael. Love the last line the most. :)
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Date: 9/10/2011 9:42:00 AM
The poetic imagery fused here is just celestial.Excellent Michael. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 9/10/2011 9:39:00 AM
Good one, Michael. Best wishes for the contest. Kim
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