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Streets of solitude

let’s say it like it is no one else can feel zing of bliss magnetism that imparts zest and zeal alone in midst of many we share but none can pair rapture within that rises of consciousness self-aware life as impulsed unfolds we play our role as ordained yet from fears and desires soul’s been long since unchained we see through subterfuge with a kindly eye within each form we see God’s presence draw nigh vibrant in aloneness as we are breathed day and night boundaries blur, clear light dawns betwixt bliss beat’s delight both immanent and transcendent encased in feeble form how may we delineate our heart’s toroidal storm

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Date: 12/17/2024 9:22:00 AM
Dear seeker your way with words is just flawless and is so profound and leaves me in awe of the depth and wisdom that flows within your well articulate lines! Sublime rhymes as always and i love the cadence of your poem, i also love especially the lines “life as impulsed unfolds we play our role as ordained yet from fears and desires soul’s been long since unchained” so much depth! I always enjoy reading your poems and just taking in every word to reflect! Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/17/2024 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, IE dear for your kind words of encouragement and for the placement. I’m happy what I wished to convey has been well received. Thank you.
Date: 12/1/2024 8:44:00 PM
You are so ascetic and hermit like, carrying bliss and God's peace in your body and soul. Unlike ordinary mortals, you don't seek company, but seek grace and fulfillment in 'vibrant aloneness' when boundaries blur and clear light dawns betwixt bliss beat’s delight." So beautiful a poem and so beautiful an experience. Stay blessed dear Seeker friend.
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:06:00 PM
I’m no ascetic, Valsa, rather I enjoy the material gifts of life that have come my way but that said, yes, I’m not in the rat race to accumulate wealth and more or less remain in thought rested stillness. I was fortunate to imbibe bliss in permanence, which occurred by the spontaneous activation of the kundalini … it happens after a complicated process, which is guided by invisible adepts, we are just a receptor. I’ve written about this here and there but counsel that no one should attempt to force the process.

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