Streetlamps

Streetlamps of highway true viewers Of unrehearsed life.
form: Lune syllables: 5/3/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Hi Kiran, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:01 AM
KIRAN, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:53 AM
lovely poem Kiran congrats on win hugs
Bantawa Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 8:38 AM
thank you very much!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 4:10 PM
wow ! that line unrehearsed life... so much!!!! Congratulations!!!
Bantawa Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:21 AM
glad you liked it, I appreciate it, thank you!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Wonderful n clever write Kiran ! Loved to read ,, a deserved great win ,, congrats !
Bantawa Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Thanks for commenting & sparing a time to read.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, Kiran
Bantawa Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Again many thanks! I appreciate it.
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:29 PM
a very creative one!!! Congrats for your win.
Bantawa Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Thank you Andrea for liking this one !
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Bantawa Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:33 PM
thank you Joyce !
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Kiran, what a thought-provoking poem. This is a wonderful Lune and if it's for Debbie's contest, I'm sure she will love it too. Best wishes, Carolyn
Bantawa Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:54 PM
thank you very much!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace