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Streetlamps

Streetlamps of highway true viewers Of unrehearsed life. form: Lune syllables: 5/3/5

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:07:00 PM

Hi Kiran, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:01:00 AM

KIRAN, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/2/2014 6:53:00 AM

lovely poem Kiran congrats on win hugs

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/5/2014 8:38:00 AM

thank you very much!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/1/2014 4:10:00 PM

wow ! that line unrehearsed life... so much!!!! Congratulations!!!

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:21:00 AM

glad you liked it, I appreciate it, thank you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/1/2014 11:41:00 AM

Wonderful n clever write Kiran ! Loved to read ,, a deserved great win ,, congrats !

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:21:00 AM

Thanks for commenting & sparing a time to read.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2014 1:51:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, Kiran

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 6/2/2014 6:19:00 AM

Again many thanks! I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2014 11:29:00 PM

a very creative one!!! Congrats for your win.

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 5/31/2014 11:34:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for liking this one !

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/31/2014 8:53:00 PM

Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 5/31/2014 11:33:00 PM

thank you Joyce !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2014 12:17:00 PM

Kiran, what a thought-provoking poem. This is a wonderful Lune and if it's for Debbie's contest, I'm sure she will love it too. Best wishes, Carolyn

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 5/20/2014 7:54:00 PM

thank you very much!