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Get beat up in a street fight, yeah, that's life. Win the lead part in a play.. well hey, that's life too.. then someday comes to pass.., Find someone that moves you.. deep in a place you never new existed. Even better, they had that place too, same as you. You can heal from a street fight., there will always be another play. (sound of glass breaking, horns blaring, whatever fits) Losing that special someone.. You never can quite get past it, seems. I don't think it was meant to be easy to replace, those dark eyes.. Like a toe.., or an arm. Moral of this story.., who knows. Seemed so easy to let them in, yet so hard to walk away..

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Date: 2/18/2022 12:33:00 PM
Well conveyed much empathy In your lines.'
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Date: 8/29/2021 10:19:00 AM
Oh my GOSH, this is SO beautiful. I love your anologies and how poignantly you expressed this sad message. FAVE
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Date: 8/26/2021 11:18:00 AM
Such heartfelt lines of losing someone special... Enjoyed reading Richard... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/21/2021 12:42:00 PM
I know its easy to get involved, hard to say goodbye, that is why many never bother, but it hurts when they do. Nicely penned with much heart felt lines, thankyou Richard, :)
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Date: 8/19/2021 11:09:00 AM
So true Richard! I completely understand. So well written. I hope all is well and you have a nice afternoon :)
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Date: 8/19/2021 5:37:00 AM
I hear the poignant voice of losing the special someone, Richard. The ending spells the essence.
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