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Streams flowing into a river

Streams flowing into a river ebbing and flowing rising and falling The river separating them back into streams Many lives merging into one lifeline accounting for everything and nothing at the same time Personalities rubbing, chafing inexorably blending in psychosomatic asynchrony yet linked inextricably with heaven Streams flowing into a river The river separating them out back into streams…

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Date: 12/14/2024 9:03:00 AM
This is deep, Gershon. An exquisite poem. Hope your Shabbat is serene. Shalom :)
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Date: 12/4/2024 10:39:00 AM
Loved how you associated the " streams into a river to "Many lives merging into one lifeline..." "Linked with Heaven" Life's cycle for both. Clever Free Verse with associated dual meanings linked to heaven. Well thought Gershon and much appreciated by me to read. Have a nice day my friend and thank you for the effort in writing...
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Date: 12/4/2024 5:53:00 AM
oh, you meandering metaphorist. The eternal cycle of departure and returns...
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Date: 12/4/2024 8:10:00 PM
And at the airport --- arrivals and returns... and at the department store -- thefts and no returns. ~ Many happy returns, John.

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