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What does the world See Through my tomorrows Dollar signs, Mistaken identities, Fallen dreams, Or My poignant smile … Can we bare the judgments From tomorrow’s “bliss” When all our tears want Is serenity’s kiss Through the rain Through the rain, We Rise Another climb towards epiphany’s sanity But, through these tomorrows, Who shall walk by my side? ©Drake J. Eszes

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/10/2016 12:47:00 AM

Hopefully the poignant smile, friend. You have an unmistakable style it seems. They are like little trails of thoughts that somehow weave into an intricate poem ... I also enjoy how it's not just about words with you, but you seem to want to make your poems very visually appealing as well. Excellent!

Poet Tacito
Date: 4/3/2016 10:33:00 AM

Yes, that visual appeal is very important to me, for my readers. This means a lot, sir. Thank you so much!!

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/19/2015 11:36:00 AM

Drake, Drake, Drake... you have been missed my friend! Do me a favour... hang around for a bit!!! Cheers, Jackson!

Poet Tacito
Date: 11/19/2015 11:37:00 AM

I will. I will. :) You've been missed too. True story. :) Cheers, my kind sir!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/19/2015 10:28:00 AM

what an introspective, almost cathartic imprint, drake..glad to see you back!..i went to new to new york, instead!... yeowww!..huggs

Poet Tacito
Date: 11/19/2015 11:08:00 AM

New York? Damn, I hope you had fun and I'm glad you survived all of that craziness there.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/15/2015 9:11:00 AM

Dropping by to say hi, you seem to have dissapeared.

Poet Tacito
Date: 11/19/2015 10:10:00 AM

Life, life. :) I'm still around. We'll chat soon.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/27/2015 7:13:00 AM

It ain't about the money, it's all about the Love. Couldn't a agree more. Hope all is awesome.

Poet Tacito
Date: 11/19/2015 10:09:00 AM

Damn right. Thanks, Scott!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/26/2015 5:01:00 PM

I dont know about the dollar signs nor the mistaken identities, but I can see some fallen dreams , and an amazing smile, but hey Im com9letely Opeless : ) at being a clairvoyant : ). Through the rain, we all rise one day or another.. Remain true to yourself and you ll never walk alone, your soul will be your faithful companion, crowds are merely true friends. Love your honesty in your poems. Fantastic to have you back here, and awesome to read 'you' :)

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/26/2015 5:09:00 PM

Absolutely!!! I hope you & the family are doing great, Charmaine!!! I couldn't agree with you more! :) Thank you so much!

Samiha Zubair

Date: 9/12/2015 3:15:00 PM

It's a great poem of howcmuch we invest in tomorrow that we miss today. Indeed a good write.

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/28/2015 6:25:00 AM

Cheers & thanks!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2015 3:24:00 PM

If you have a chance, I posted a new one this morning. I still wish to do a collaboration with you, let me know when and how that might work. Also check out my site www.wisedummypoet.com

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 3:36:00 PM

Roger that!!! :D Yes, we should collab it out. I'll message you w/my email.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/11/2015 12:57:00 PM

An insightful poem that penetrates reality! Well done, dear Drake! Nice to see you again!

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 2:09:00 PM

Per usual, that means so much, Demetrios! Super happy to see you around here still too. Cheers!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2015 11:17:00 AM

So glad to see a new one Drake. With words like this I suspect your tomorrow will have no shortage of walking companions!

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 11:23:00 AM

I have a few new things in the queue. ;-) You may be right. But, life is full of surprises. But, bring it, I say...you rock, Richard!!!

Heather Ober

Date: 9/11/2015 11:09:00 AM

Yes! A new one! :) What I love most about your poetry is how open it is to interpretation. I can read one of your poems several times and come away with something different each time - The sign of a true poet! "Through the rain, we rise" - Is it okay if I make that my anthem for the next little while?

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 11:22:00 AM

WOOOT, HEATHER! :D That's what I aim to do...to have the reader (hopefully) learn something new with each re-read. Layered poetry, perhaps? Also, yes, you absolutely can make it your anthem! Be the thunder. ;-)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 9/11/2015 10:57:00 AM

Awesome Drake.. so happy to be visiting poems of this caliber again... this is beautiful.. "Another climb towards epiphany’s sanity But, through these tomorrows, Who shall walk by my side?".. love it !! ~~X~~

Poet Tacito
Date: 9/11/2015 11:19:00 AM

:D WOOOOT! Thank you so much, Kim!