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stream with meaning :ray of a light in this poem

Stream

The  shivered  ,broken
stream spills  over a hued
dreamfulness.
The scarlet  woven
carnation is beautified
with a shining diamond.
The enriched rainbow is  a redolent,
 odorous rose.
The unerring, genuine
chrysanthemum like
a dreamful sun.
The jewellike, gemmed  greenery
radiates from a sublime
fervent sunflower.
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Daniels Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 12:50 AM
Congrats on your placement in Brian’s Contest, Mulu. I enjoyed the last two lines. Sending Light. Keep writing. Xx
Magdalinos Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:40 AM
Thank you Ghairo .for encouraging words.
Empress Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 2:35 PM
Ah absolutely gorgeous! Theres a rhythm to it so very soul stirring and melodious, and i also love “ fervent sunflower” and “ odorous rose” as well as “dreamful sun” how stunning! A fave for me! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
Magdalinos Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:34 AM
Thank you for uplifting comment on this piece.
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