Strawberry Snails Forever

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Strawberry Snails Forever, is a picture prompt limerick, 5 lines, a rhyme scheme of a,a,b,b,a, and a syllabic meter of 9,9,6,6,9, it is written in 61 words. The image is by YunFan.

Strawberry Snails Forever There once was a strawberry pink snail. She was sweet from her nose to her tail. She crossed over the moss. Never stopping or cross. Eating bits growing out of the shale. By Josehf Lloyd Murchison

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Jacqueline Elston

Date: 12/18/2024 9:34:00 AM

This is really good. l'v learnt something new about limerick writing as iv not tried that style yet. Thank you. J.

Josehf Murchison
Date: 12/18/2024 10:27:00 AM

Thank You