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Strawberry Sherbert

I had strawberry sherbert dreams until they got sidestepped by melancholy chocolate cake. My dreams shattered like crumpled pie toppings. Now I have no desire for sweets. Alexis Y. 03/26/2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2021 9:53:00 AM

Good one. I got a chuckle but of course pain from a heartbreak isn't funny. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/26/2021 1:36:00 PM

I yearn for some sweet but with a borderline diabetes I have to be carful. Lovely poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/26/2021 12:24:00 PM

So cute, just like you! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2021 10:21:00 AM

It's cute the way "sweet dreams" ruined your appetite for goodies. Wish this would happen to me :) Cute poem, Alexis! Hugs, Carolyn

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/26/2021 8:40:00 AM

Great imagery... Loved it... Cute one...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2021 8:08:00 AM

Lol, after my visit to the dentist yesterday im off sweet things. Hope you have a lovely weekend Tom

Judy Ball

Date: 3/26/2021 7:49:00 AM

This one brought a smile to my face. Love it. God Bless, JB