Strawberry Flavored Lipstick and Canada Dry

She used to wear 
tasty strawberry gloss lipstick
on her soft warm tender lips
and sometimes Canada dry
for me to sip
It lured me like a moth to a flame
But even without
her sweet kisses drove me insane
Trying to quench the unquenchable thirst
of hearts desire.




Peter Dome.copyright.2013. July.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/13/2013 6:58:00 PM
Ahhhh...reminds me a little bit of my snake bit poem...young love is awesome...so is your poem...they made those lip gloss come in yummy flavors in the 70's...:-)
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/13/2013 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, yes young love, the butterflies fluttering in the stomach and the sleepless nights, the first thumbled kiss.The strange thing is, we don;t really appreciate it until we are older and look back..take good care Best wishes.Pete.
Date: 7/25/2013 8:18:00 PM
I like this! The heart's desire is unquenchable! Wonderful write. :)
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Date: 7/23/2013 8:05:00 PM
short but to the point! I enjoyed this very much! Laura :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 7/24/2013 1:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, I really appreciate that. Sweet 16 first love. Take care, warm best wishes.Pete.
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