Strawberries and Cream

Daybreak slipping through these champagne curtains

Red silk; twined aneath crimsons sheets; awakening....

This afterglows mornings dew; her wet moist kisses 

Soft sunrise and whom can deny such love; about her

Kittens den; purrr; feed me this need of your heavenly

Breed; cranberry breast amid sweet sublime; suckling

Her thirsting poetics child; a virgins verse as capturing

Venus aside strokes swirling atop sanguines canvas....

Splashed in maroons colours of a daybreak; pink silk 

Aneath sheets slipping through tomorrows champagne 

Curtains parting their purrring; brushing this her beauty 

Within a moist dews afterglow; intoxicatings sweet, wet

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...."Red Rums Kiss * 'Strawberries And Cream'" ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/25/2012 9:44:00 PM
Oh yes I do like this ;}
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Date: 5/14/2012 12:21:00 AM
One for my favourites..sooooooo very beautiful John.. By the way did i tell you?the baby is going to be a baby girl :)... and the name is going to be Christina :).
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:41:00 AM
* . . "SMILE * 'MY SWEEET BABY GIRL.'" . . *
Date: 5/10/2012 2:55:00 PM
I think I can write now, the blush is fading and I feel a bit stronger. Quite something to read this John, it flows beautifully and is quite provocative. I like the softness in it and feel your poems have a signature even if your name wasn't on it. Luv, Lizzy :)
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:36:00 PM
Very nice dear poet.
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Date: 5/9/2012 5:05:00 PM
A very tender piece, as everyone is saying. Another nice one! :3 Always, Laura
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:23:00 AM
WOW,Wonderful I love it,powerful poem.....
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Date: 5/8/2012 9:19:00 PM
*blush* deeply beautiful, John...love, deb
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Date: 5/8/2012 6:02:00 PM
This is ART!! Love it!!
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Date: 5/8/2012 4:39:00 PM
Passionate work..Sara
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:30:00 AM
....'Smile ˜ "Thank You For 'The Inspriration, My Beautiful Love.'" *
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John Rhinem
Date: 5/8/2012 4:43:00 PM
. . "Thank You, 'My Love.'" *
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