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08/05/23

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Strawberries

Strawberries from my garden
sun kissed, so juicy
Piled high on crisp meringue nests
and lush white whipped cream
I just adore this
summertime
treat

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Joe Maverick

Date: 8/11/2023 8:03:00 AM

Your address Jan and make it snappy, the Meringues i mean, i preffer the hand whipped Cream, if you don't mind gurl, oh and a double Sized bowl, and berries also as wèll.' After that I like a nap I won't do a sofa, my prefference Flat' a small double in your loft room, i will Consider that? Are you close to bus stops? If i Come thther? Let me know about the races and Very well might? Come over and grace your Isle manx tonight? Or next week? I won't come Once summers over though.'

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/10/2023 5:28:00 AM

May I come to you for Tea Jan, next time we come to England. It looks so yummy I am going to make this tonight, although, w I presume this would be high tea or supper experiencewith dinner following later? CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/9/2023 8:54:00 AM

Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading it again. I love strawberries/raspberries. Wish I had your garden. Enjoy. Them... Have a great day with your win............

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/7/2023 7:06:00 AM

A delicious poem Jan - I love strawberries too! Love the line,’ Sun kissed, so juicy’.I shall think of it when I am eating some next time! Thank you for sharing.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/6/2023 9:59:00 AM

I planted a bed of strawberries this year. This picture accurately represents the total of my harvest. Hopefully, next year will be better. I will read them this poem every day for inspiration. Have a nice day.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:09:00 AM

But think of next year Jerry! The plants will throw out runners this year, peg them down into the soil and you will double your plant stock and in time they will yield strawberries too!:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/5/2023 8:12:00 PM

As for me, I eat it. (What's to adore?!). Cheers, gw

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:08:00 AM

Me too GW:-) nothing like home grown ones compared to the irradiated ones from the shops! hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2023 6:59:00 PM

Yummy! Enjoyed the treat!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2023 11:18:00 AM

I rarely do either, but so glad you did, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:07:00 AM

Thanks Kim, I seldom write this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M

Date: 8/5/2023 5:19:00 PM

How very beautiful Jan! And not a poop in sight hehe!! Debx

Deb M
Date: 8/6/2023 3:25:00 PM

Haha yes!! Was that deliberate Jan??

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:07:00 AM

I beg to disagree Deb ... well if you look hard enough don't you think the meringue looks a little like a poop emoji lol:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/5/2023 3:48:00 PM

Hello Jan, i love the strawberries. Fresh or in a jam. But I would skip the whipped cream. Hugs. xx/Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2023 10:41:00 AM

Hello Jan, okay once in a whioe i will have whipped cream. /Dalene/ Hugs. xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:06:00 AM

oh you need whipped cream with meringues lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/5/2023 2:49:00 PM

Beautifully written, Jan. Your use of vivid imagery is truly captivating. This literary delight is exquisitely executed, demonstrating great skill and craftsmanship. Well done, indeed.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:05:00 AM

Your delightful positive comments spur me on to try hard with poetry - and not just poopy poems too! hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/5/2023 2:05:00 PM

A tasty treat Jan, Very nicely done, hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2023 10:04:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2023 1:18:00 PM

- I ate all mine yesterday... lovely taste of summer, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 1:46:00 PM

Strawberries always reminds me of Wimbledon tennis , its traditional for people to eat them there - I expect the cost is astronomical though, I'm lucky I grow my own lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/5/2023 12:55:00 PM

"STRAWBERRIES" so sweet just like this sweet write/picture. I am having some with dinner. From the store not a garden. I also put in a "S" word. Have a blessed day...................

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 1:44:00 PM

I grow them in the garden and raspberries too, the strawberry crop hasn't been good, but the raspberries are amazing again this year:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2023 11:26:00 AM

Very COOL, Jan. I better hurry and think of a great S word. maybe I will do food too!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 11:29:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I think you introduced me to this form, without the contest prompts I would never have tried so many different forms, although limericks will always be my fave - only started writing those because of Roy's contests! hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/5/2023 11:14:00 AM

Yum! Invite me over please, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/5/2023 11:27:00 AM

The strawberries have all but finished - think the dry weather didn't do the plants any favours even though I tried watering them at night the ground was so dry, I do have a huge crop of raspberries though and you'd be welcome any day - would love to meet if I ever get across the pond:-) hugs Jan xx

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