Strapped In

We’re at a standstill—
a standoff of semi-automatic emotion, knowing

in our instability, we pull each other’s triggers
and cannot truly be capable of loving one another.

But I’m still begging him not to give up 
like I'm begging him not to shoot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Great metaphor. Congratulations
Daniels Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 7:19 PM
Short powerful Metaphor, Talon. In our instability we pull each other’s triggers > very truthful line > ThkU for posting. Be blessed for your poetry. Light from South Africa. X.
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