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image from ancient-origins.net

“Medieval hermits were individuals who chose—or felt called—to withdraw from society and live in solitude. Their lives were often guided by deep religious devotion, acts of penance, or mystical experiences. Living in caves, forests, or tiny cells, these hermits became figures of both reverence and mystery...They were often seen as mysterious figures who had renounced the world and its material pleasures in order to focus on their spiritual journey." (Source: medievalchronicles.com/medieval-people/the-strange-and-mysterious-lives-of-medieval-hermits/)

Poem written for and submitted to “Variation of Dramatic or Light Verse” poetry contest, Nette Onclaud, sponsor September 7, 2025

STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT-Medieval Hermits

STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ two strangers in the night met no names were exchanged no histories were unveiled, only shared glances wind sighed through gaunt tree branches in each other’s eyes a shared moment, communion of sacred journeys
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Swan Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 2:18 AM
An interesting silent understanding of shared experience in a different era.J :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:07 AM
Your poetry, preface, and image work together well. The result is just stunning. The concluding three phrases of every stanza convey a great deal!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:06 PM
thank you, Sotto, for your uplifting comments...they made my evening. Wishing you a pleasant evening there in PA, hugs from Texas, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 8:11 PM
Great write!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:05 PM
thank you, sweet Kim!
Fowler Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Much enjoyed this one Sara. The last three lines of each stanza say so much! A fav. :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:05 PM
awww, thank you, Linda. Glad you enjoyed this poem & I'm humbly grateful for the fave...wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 8:12 AM
What a lovely combination of image, your preamble and your poem. Beautiful package ~
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September 8, 2025 at 6:04 PM
thank you, Line! appreciate you and your visits, Sara
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