Tucker Carwile Jr Poet Free verse

Strange Places

When I rolled over with you,
                                     I gazed at blankets
                                            hung over dirty windows,
                                   The ceiling,
                                          with designs from
                                       JC Penney Co.
           
                                      And then,
                                            there you are.
                                      Smiling, 
                                            touching,
                                         knowing that with you.
                                      We can make this place
                                         the Hilton.
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Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 2:53 AM TUCKER,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

Bob Quigley February 7, 2012 at 10:09 PM From small beginnings. Nicely written. Congratulations Tucker Tucker Carwile Jr February 12, 2012 at 7:00 AM thank you, but it seems strange to get congrats on something you love to do

Jon Arno February 7, 2012 at 5:12 PM Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon