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Strange Bird: My Life In 9 Lines

Unwanted 'ugly-duckling', pushed from nest early Spiraled down to unspeakable depths, crushed Astonished by unexpected love and care, grew wings Awkwardly flapped to outlandish heights Tragedies hit, like plate glass window mid-flight Expectations shattered, painful shards embedded Weight of life's strain, lost dreams, broke wings Fell back to earth, grounded, exhausted Scarred but somewhat stronger, re-learning to fly

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/29/2018 7:26:00 AM

Coming back with congrats.

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/29/2018 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much, congratulations to you, too!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/29/2018 2:15:00 AM

Wow Rhona. Congratulations on a win in the contest! I am so glad for you, and you truly deserved it!

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/29/2018 4:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend! I feel very happy & flattered with the honor!

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/28/2018 7:50:00 PM

Wow Rhona. Reminds me of the Chines curse - may you live in interesting times! Here's to hoping this next phase of your life is a little LESS interesting. Line xx

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/29/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thank you- I certainly hope so!! ;D

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/27/2018 5:27:00 PM

I love how you carried the bird conceit through the entire poem. Good luck in the contest.

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/27/2018 8:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, friend! Good luck to you, too! ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2018 3:16:00 PM

I have a sonnet somewhere called strange birds. I was the one who hung out with my school's strange birds!

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/27/2018 8:24:00 PM

I know what you mean, I've always had very "diverse" friends, too... I guess it's a writer's trait- we like to be where the people & events are interesting! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2018 3:15:00 PM

I am sure this is the kind of poetry the judge was wanting from us. Wish I could have thought of such an expressive way to do my life story as you did!!

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/27/2018 8:21:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment! ;) I wasn't quite sure if this was the right track to take... but I got "metaphoric" out of desperation, as it was the only way I could figure to condense my life story! lol (Brevity is not one of my talents!...)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2018 11:14:00 AM

A beautiful write, darling the way you have said so much in nine little lines. Good luck in the contest my friend!

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/27/2018 12:07:00 PM

Thank you- you know it's a struggle for me to curb my wordiness! ;) Good luck to you too, dear one!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/27/2018 11:04:00 AM

Bless your feathered mess Rhona. SO Wonderfully done. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/27/2018 12:05:00 PM

Aaaawww! ;D Thank you so much, my friend!