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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Strands To Promised Land

Pen and paper on hand, penning rhapsodies of dreams and memoirs strands
Some simple and some grand, to understand: a sweet view to promised land

2:20 PM
APRIL 21, 2014

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Donald Williams

April 24, 2014 at 6:35 AM

I just happen to love some couplet LOL nice pen and lovely write. I'll read some more as time permits you are talented and I'm looking forward to it.

Shadow Hamilton

April 24, 2014 at 4:43 AM

short but succulent Olive a most enjoyable pen hugs

Olatunji Samson

April 22, 2014 at 10:56 AM

Nice work,nice rhyme.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 22, 2014 at 12:43 PM

Thank you for dropping by:) I appreciate your comments:)

April 21, 2014 at 5:15 PM

Beautiful Olive_eloi :) (I would add a 'd' to promise :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 22, 2014 at 12:41 PM

Thank you Paul I appreciate your comment and correction:)

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