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Strands of Consciousness

High on tiptoes, fingertips reach for unknown eternity No existence no seen reality nothing coherent Tendrils of tight knit gold lash out seeking Connection, link to fingers outstretched Music only heard inside mysteriously connect strands of consciousness Unawares of surroundings Little boy, little girl Dance, dance *** December 22, 2016
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Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Lovely descriptive poem, Darren. And also wanted to say a big Merry Christmas to you as I go off here for the day (but probably I'll come back this evening. I always do. haha)
White Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Merry Christmas, Andrea :)
Polydoro Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Such a sweet thing, this lack of worry, just enjoying themselves - love it <3
White Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Yeah, this was inspired by a poem/song of Mark (here below) but I had my little niece in mind)
Gupta Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 4:53 AM
beautiful strains from fingers towards infinity ... a very good creativity ...
White Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 6:06 AM
Thank you so much :)
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