Stranded

Imagine this - you take a cruise.
You’re out at sea, with gorgeous views,
When suddenly all systems fail
And you are stuck – no way to bail.

A fire started this distress
But soon, the ship was quite a mess – 
No air-conditioning or light,
The darkness frightening at night.

For thousands stranded on the ship,
This turned into a nightmare trip.
The lines for food made moods turn sour
But, far worse, was with no power,

Toilets quickly ceased to flush;
Sewage seeped to rooms once plush.
Plastic bags did substitute,
So human waste would not pollute.

Optimism faded quick – 
Passengers were getting sick.
Still, they had to sit and wait;
No one could evacuate.

Finally, the ship was towed.
More than refunds, folks are owed;
Which explains – you’ll understand – 
Why my vacations stay on land!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 11:28 AM
Amen...and then this morning marveling that they got the robes complimentary!!!! Wow... great poem.....
Manassian Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Ilene, Ilene, Ilene...how do you do it? I loved this....the humor. The situation you described would have me bawling my eyes out! Great write! Hugs! :)
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