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Create A Cuatro Poetry Contest, sponsored by Nette Onclaud, dated 2025 October 09

Stranded

The tempest dins glass
where once a dawning face beamed
painted lips sipped tea
as the phone rings, plans and swells crash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:37 AM
What a delightful winning work. Descriptive, creative and on target. Way to go. Congratulations to you!! Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 7:02 AM
My appreciation, Sara, Aloha William.
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Nice one, Hilo. Congratulations
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Enjoy, Aloha.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Stranded" write again. Have a blessed day with your win...................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Again, my thanks, as there is never enough. Aloha, my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:21 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Stranded" write.  "Good Luck" I did SANDCASTLES. Have a Blessed day writing away..........
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:56 PM
I appreciate it, my friend. Have a blessed day, Aloha.
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:47 PM
I hope all goes well. All the best for the contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:53 PM
Thanks for your kind share, my friend. Aloha.
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