Strain

more stress, more pain
its hot sunny, it never rain
I have loss, hardly a gain
for sure i am soon running in sane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Hard for me to relate to this... I'm basically happier now than I've ever been! But you describe your mood very well... cheers!
Ndlovu Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Interesting form, burlesque, i`ve never heard of it-i`m going to look it up and try it myself! A poignant piece...it actually relates to my life at the moment...i do hope it will rain for us soon. ^_^ Y.L.N
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