Straightaway

straightaway bb cuts air heading for tin can - sudden gush of sprite
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Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 7:52 PM
hahahahahahaha... If bb hits 'Mountain Dew,' 'you're in's on you!'
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 10:38 AM
What a hearty laugh! Still it was my first time! So proud, next to my grandson.
Brotherton Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:21 AM
A lighthearted Haiku Kim. I love it. Have a beautiful day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Thank you, Jerry! My grandson was showing me how to shoot a b.b. gun! :)
Baker Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Got to watch those stray bbs! I like your Haiku, Kim. Something light to make things bright. Thanks, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:31 AM
We were careful :)
Hind Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Ha! I love that stuff!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Awesome, Paige!
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