straight spine : haiku


sovereignty

dark to light with bold boulders 

my spine is now straight ~
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Hind Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 5:53 PM
a deep concept :) great work <3
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 5:16 PM
Sweet & deep write dear lovely sweet GD :-) Blessings & hugs ~ AA
Rodgers Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 11:52 AM
Dear Ghairo, I love the weight of 'bold boulders' here. It gives the poem a tactile, grounded energy that makes the final line feel incredibly sturdy. A beautiful piece of self-assertion. Spring Blessings, Daniel
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