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Poetic Form: Than Bauk

Inspired: 2023 November 03

*1st Place*
Something Bauk-tiful
Contest Judged: 2023 November 17
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

Image: News of A Puppy For Christmas by Giphy

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Straight Face Curves-Tb

Love expresses
~on faces by~
traces of smiles.

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Terry Miller

November 20, 2023 at 3:46 AM

Congratulations!

Karen Croft

November 17, 2023 at 11:19 PM

Congratulations!!

William Kelii Kekaula

November 17, 2023 at 11:35 PM

Your light shines, Karen. Aloha, William

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2023 at 9:04 PM

Nice! Congratulations, William!

William Kelii Kekaula

November 17, 2023 at 9:15 PM

Thanks, Kim, for your continued support. Aloha, William

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 10:03 AM

Aloha William! Wonderfully written, hoaaloha! So true! Your lines are full of love's delight! I am slowly catching up and digging out! Thank you for your understanding and wonderful support! Sending you congratulations on wings of smiles! Happy Thanksgiving!

William Kelii Kekaula

November 17, 2023 at 11:01 AM

I’m going to need a tamer turkey for me’tums, but, you can add an extra dollop of whipped cream on that pumpkin pie, Sam. Happy gobbling-day from the Kalua piggy State, Aloha, William

Charles Messina

November 17, 2023 at 4:05 AM

Wonderful, William. A bauktiful write! Congratulations on your win!

William Kelii Kekaula

November 17, 2023 at 7:49 AM

Aloha, Charles. Cheers and more so, Than-kful for its, sponsor. Mahalo, William

Sara Kendrick

November 10, 2023 at 1:21 PM

I have written some of these a long time ago. I enjoyed reading yours which seems so seamless and the nice accompanying video. I know from writing them they are not easy. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula

November 10, 2023 at 6:56 PM

Mahalo, Sara, and to you as well. I use the sonance of the words, whether they'd be a consonant or vowel sound, and where in (syllabically) does the sound resonates. Again, thank you in-kind, my friend. Aloha, William

Sotto Poet

November 6, 2023 at 4:55 AM

William, The finesse with which you have approached this piece truly showcases your artistic abilities. The captivating moments captured on faces, portrayed through subtle traces of smiles, perfectly align with the underlying theme. Your execution of this expression of love is commendable.

William Kelii Kekaula

November 6, 2023 at 5:13 AM

Oh, Lasaad, you are the epitome of a true friend! Your idyllic considerations are so encouraging and an absolute delight to read. I extend my sincerest courtesies and thank you for your visit! Aloha, William