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Story Song

If I could write a story song Our loves’ beginning, told in time In beautiful, eventful words Perhaps a Sonnet of a rhyme If I could write of younger days Of unexpected rendezvous Of fate’s design or destiny I’d write of how I first met you There’d be no Taxis, Chances Are No Auld Lang Synes, no Lyin’ Eyes There only would be tears of joy For having lived love’s sweet surprise If I could write a story song Then every word could fill a page For love needs only thought to live And thought defies all time and age And so my story would portray The fortune of love’s wondrous gift Of one remembered summer night Of wandered hearts, no more to drift

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Date: 6/17/2024 12:49:00 AM
Lovely write!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 3:53:00 AM
Thank you Karen!!
Date: 6/10/2024 5:47:00 AM
I love this poem. A Fave for me. ! Happy Monday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/10/2024 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 6/8/2024 7:59:00 AM
A song to sing. Very emotional and flowing. I like the repetitive words of "If I could write". Lovely poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/9/2024 5:59:00 AM
Thank you Victor!!! Happy Sunday!
Date: 6/8/2024 4:00:00 AM
This is for some reason so inspiring and absolutely stunning and so soulfully moving! I love so many lines in this especially “ In beautiful, eventful words Perhaps a Sonnet of a rhyme If I could write of younger days Of unexpected rendezvous Of fate’s design or destiny I’d write of how I first met you” love that! Touching and beautiful! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light dear mike
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/8/2024 4:40:00 AM
Ink Empress, thank you so much for your kind words and the light, I affirm to live in the light every day!!!
Date: 6/7/2024 12:43:00 PM
What a lovely/romantic "Story Song" write. Have a great/blessed ~ day/weekend...................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/8/2024 4:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula, a Happy Saturday to you xxoo
Date: 6/7/2024 12:11:00 PM
This is so tender and lovely Mike.. You are a real romantic... lovely lines through out..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/8/2024 4:37:00 AM
Thank you Silent One, for as long as I can remember, I have been a hopeless romantic, come what may! Happy Saturday!!
Date: 6/7/2024 9:05:00 AM
Bootiful!! Tender and romantic Mike! Debx
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Deb M
Date: 6/7/2024 1:23:00 PM
Oh indeed it is Mr Gentile Hehe!! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/7/2024 10:33:00 AM
OMG, is Bootful good, lol?? Thanks Deb xxoo
Date: 6/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
Quite a romantic feel good verse Mike, without love we'd certainly be lost. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/7/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Tom!!

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