Story of Love Ending

STORY OF LOVE ENDING
Love can be a sad story
Because of its bad endings
As everything will be history
Only discussing up past happy beginnings

Love is sometimes difficult
Because of that unbearable left cut
That needs serious mending
As a results of surprised ending
Sometimes when love ends is like a boat sinking
Because of too much deep thinking
And where you will feel like a fool
As everything seems right but not cool
Unexpected love endings needs love insurance
As a guarantee for love assurance
So that one can be sure 
That indeed I am insured

When love ends, we are left heart broken
As we cannot cope with the echoes of word spoken
As everything slowly and slowly dies because of lies
But we will give hope to ourselves that we are not the first
As it has been there and always exist

Yes that the story of ending love
Where your heart will feel that empty hole
Feeling like you are bitten by a shark 
Because they will be no that love spark 
But all working together for peace
Piece by piece.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 23, 2015 at 12:11 AM
Tshambane, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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August 24, 2015 at 5:13 AM
Skat A thanks a lot my dear, i appreciate your comment my sister.
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