Story about the moon, sun and a star

the sun was burning with love for the moon, 
and the moon shone so brightly just for the sun. 
they would ever see each other for only a split second
before the other one disappeared with the others arrival, 
a love in passing by, but not fleeting. 
and Sirius as the brightest star, 
dimmed every night, more and more 
- the star has fallen for the moon, 
despite the unrequited love, 
and proposed the eternity of love to the moon, 
but the moon remained forever stuck 
in that one second illuminated by the sun's rays.

-	I'm not shining anymore, my moon. I finally am a fallen star.
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Agustin Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 11:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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