Debjani Mitra Poet Tanka

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once upon a dream
you made me feel like a queen
gathering treasures
novel unfolded slowly 
lived happy never after




Dated 22nd February 2020
Sponsor	Jenish Somadas
Contest Name: Let the Pens Flow - Tanka

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Eve Roper February 25, 2020 at 9:49 PM Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2020 at 12:57 PM - Today you are a queen ... with a wonderful first place in the contest, Debjani :) - Congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas February 25, 2020 at 9:41 AM Even the sad ending not stealing the beauty of the dream.. Congrats Debjani..

Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2020 at 7:56 PM Such a sad finale! Many do not live happily ever after yet that’s why we turn to fairy takes...we hope to!

Line Gauthier February 22, 2020 at 8:14 AM Lovely, Debjani. Debjani Mitra February 22, 2020 at 6:31 PM Thanks Line, your appreciation means a lot