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Stormy Tableau

Burgeoning storm clouds quickly envelope the fiery red sky. Lightning forks to ground shattering the night as thunder rumbles. 3/27/21 Picture #6 For Joseph May's Tableau 2 contest Syllables checked with PS syllable checker

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:30:00 PM

Fantastic imagery. big congrats.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/1/2021 4:03:00 AM

Heya Kim, congratulations on your well deserved win, your storm certainly makes a huge impact, with fantastic imagery, cheers David

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, David!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:45:00 PM

Great imagery, Kim, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Marilene Evans

Date: 3/31/2021 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations, Kim. Well penned imagery. Happy Easter!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Marilene!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2021 9:37:00 AM

Kim, you have captured the power of the storm so well. Congratulations on your win. Sending you the blessings of Holy Week.

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/31/2021 2:57:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! Blessings to you!

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 5:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win Kim, Wonderful write

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/31/2021 2:56:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Joseph! I'm glad you liked it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/30/2021 3:23:00 AM

I had forgotten that lightning did this, but it surely does! "Lightning forks to ground" I really like this line!

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, Caren! I've heard that Florida is the lightning capitol of the world; I've certainly seen a lot of it.

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/29/2021 5:20:00 AM

Kim, I’m really impressed by this remarkable work. Striking imagery. Thanks for your soupmail visit. Howard

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/29/2021 5:19:00 AM

Kim, I’m really impressed by this remarkable work. Striking imagery. Thanks for your soupmail visit. Howard

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Howard!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2021 12:38:00 PM

You interpreted the picture well Kim, good luck in the contest, hope you are having a good weekend. Tom

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Tom!