Kim Merryman Poet Verse

Stormy Tableau

Burgeoning storm clouds
quickly envelope
the fiery red sky.
Lightning forks to ground
shattering the night
as thunder rumbles.

3/27/21
Picture #6
For Joseph May's Tableau 2 contest
Syllables checked with PS syllable checker

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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 12:30 PM Fantastic imagery. big congrats. Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:03 PM Thank you, Andrea!

David Kavanagh April 1, 2021 at 4:03 AM Heya Kim, congratulations on your well deserved win, your storm certainly makes a huge impact, with fantastic imagery, cheers David Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:03 PM Thank you, David!

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 9:45 PM Great imagery, Kim, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:02 PM Thank you, Eve!

Marilene Evans March 31, 2021 at 5:14 PM Congratulations, Kim. Well penned imagery. Happy Easter! Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:02 PM Thank you, Marilene!

Sam Kauffman March 31, 2021 at 9:37 AM Kim, you have captured the power of the storm so well. Congratulations on your win. Sending you the blessings of Holy Week. Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 2:57 PM Thank you, Sam! Blessings to you!

Joseph May March 31, 2021 at 5:18 AM Congrats on your win Kim, Wonderful write Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 2:56 PM Thank you for my placement, Joseph! I'm glad you liked it.

Caren Krutsinger March 30, 2021 at 3:23 AM I had forgotten that lightning did this, but it surely does! "Lightning forks to ground" I really like this line! Kim Merryman March 30, 2021 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Caren! I've heard that Florida is the lightning capitol of the world; I've certainly seen a lot of it.

Howard Kerr March 29, 2021 at 5:20 AM Kim, I’m really impressed by this remarkable work. Striking imagery. Thanks for your soupmail visit. Howard

Howard Kerr March 29, 2021 at 5:19 AM Kim, I’m really impressed by this remarkable work. Striking imagery. Thanks for your soupmail visit. Howard Kim Merryman March 30, 2021 at 9:49 AM Thank you, Howard!

Tom Cunningham March 27, 2021 at 12:38 PM You interpreted the picture well Kim, good luck in the contest, hope you are having a good weekend. Tom Kim Merryman March 30, 2021 at 9:49 AM Thank you, Tom!