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Stormy Skies and Seas

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Stormy skies and deadly, squallish seas
taxingly torment sailors- engaged, entrapped
aboard ambushed wood boats bouncing
like lone, helpless toys neath the muted moon.
Whipped, whirled, commonly capsized-
oft fierce forces of nature negate
the valorous vim of human hearts.


December 2, 2021

Contest: Alliterisen 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

Photo Used: #1
Syllable Sequence: D. 9-11-8-10-7-9-9 
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Date: 1/5/2022 5:25:00 PM
wonderful imagery Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2022 7:46:00 PM
Great deep feeling and imagery in your alterations, Sandra, congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love
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Date: 1/1/2022 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/2/2021 4:29:00 PM
Wow. Great one. I can feel the turmoil. Well done:)
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