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Stormy Night

wind swirls all about lighting flashes thunder crashes tis' such a stormy night I can almost touch the light as I take flight to my feet I wonder why I left my seat then comes the calm of the storm wind dies, the souls cry and the earth shakes in it's wake why did he let the storm come was it just to shake us up maybe he sick of us all he is the seeker of truth and light so why must he send down rain with all his might Tricia Bernard

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Date: 10/10/2014 8:13:00 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours Patricia !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:47:00 PM
Thank so much for reading it was a bad night for a storm but I was able to write it out with his help;-)...Tricia
Date: 10/10/2014 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Patricia. Nicely done.
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:49:00 PM
Thank so much Brenda I thank god for hejping me regain my ability to write at all thru him all things are possiple ;-)..Tricia
Date: 10/10/2014 6:10:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Patricia, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:54:00 PM
Why Thank you Dr. Ram it means a lot coming from you. This was just a bad weather night and I ask him to help me yhru so I took out my computer an this is what he did for me and when I finished so was the storm.So I know he is good all the time.;-)..Tricia
Date: 10/10/2014 4:39:00 AM
beautifully written many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:58:00 PM
Thanks I do so enjoy your comments Jan I write because I know you will keep reading my work and Dr. Ram;-)..Tricia
Date: 10/10/2014 2:53:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Patricia. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:01:00 PM
Thanks for allowing me the write I enjoyed it Leonora ;-)..Tricia
Date: 5/8/2014 7:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem Maria... I really enjoyed reading it :) Ana
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:21:00 AM
Nice lines.
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Marla
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Date: 4/30/2014 1:39:00 PM
A very interesting write Marla, thanks for sharing.
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