Sarah Frieman Poet Free verse

Stormy Night

Rain falling to the ground
Silent whispers all around
Pitter patter, pitter patter
Rain is falling all around
Warm and toasty by the fire
Sipping cocoa on the floor
Crickel crack, crickel crack
Cuddled next to the fire
Is the mother and her daughter
Crash BOOM lighting strikes
1...2...3...4...5...
The girl is counting, 
As her mother holds her tight
Soon the storm will pass
The sun will break the morning sky
Sleeping quietly next to burned out ashes
Is
The mother and her Daughter

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Sarah Frieman February 12, 2009 at 9:22 AM Thank you for all your wonderful comments, and just to clarify, this poem is about me and my mother, I'm the daughter, I only have one child my baby boy, Joshua Again thank you for the beautiful comments

Tyesha Ehigiator February 11, 2009 at 11:48 PM Very beautiful poem, love the picture of you and your daughter that you painted so wonderfully..Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha

Laura Mckenzie February 11, 2009 at 1:03 PM Congrats on your featured poem great imagery of you and your daughter! Laura :)

Michael Jordan February 11, 2009 at 4:26 AM Congrats on being featured - Dad

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 10, 2009 at 2:02 PM This sweet poem is finally featured. Congratulations Sarah. Vince

Sue Mason February 9, 2009 at 2:02 PM I can hear the thunder, Sarah ... smile ... wonderful visuals with this one ... I almost felt like they might be camping!! Excellent write and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!

Belinda Parish February 7, 2009 at 9:47 PM awe, how sweet. Comforting

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2008 at 9:58 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarah . Please keep writing and posting your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem today and hope to read more soon. Love, Carol

James Foulk August 25, 2008 at 1:44 PM thank you for reading my true friends and for your comment i have read all of your poems that you have posted, and you are a gifted poet, you need to write some more, would love to read them.

James Foulk August 23, 2008 at 5:22 PM First of all, welcome to poetrysoup. you have written a very warm and gentle poem and really enjoyed it, hope to see many more poems posted here.

Katherine Stella August 23, 2008 at 5:42 AM I used to watch lighting storms with my little girl told her God was taking her picture lol great write and read loved the imagery in this one thanks for sharing keep up the great writting blessings to you and family

Laura Mckenzie August 22, 2008 at 11:14 AM Hi Sarah Welcome to the soup here you will find a mix of wonderful poets that will bring to your new home. The welcome mats out! Great work! Laura :)

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 22, 2008 at 9:14 AM Hi Sarah, welcome to the Soup. Nice start. looking forward to reading more. God Bless. Vince

Carrie Richards August 22, 2008 at 8:41 AM Hello Sarah...It's nice to meet you, and what a great father/daughter team to have on Poetry Soup!! You are a welcome additition to our circle of friends here. This was a lovely poem....I can picture my daughter and myself curled up together during a storm and after. I think all mothers and daughters should be so lucky as to survive their storms together! As I've told your Dad....I'm here in No. Calif., somewhere not far from where he lives. Are you my neighbor also?? .Keep writing! Carrie

Sharon Winter August 22, 2008 at 8:09 AM Hi Sarah! A wonderful first poem here on the soup. The imagery was excellent and the mother/daughter bond was beautifully expressed. Hope to see more of your poetry soon. Love, Shar

P Sheart August 22, 2008 at 6:25 AM Hi Sarah,It's nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Great visual imagery here! I love the rain, so soothing and makes the house nice and cozy. Though those Thunder and lightning storms can be a bit scary especially for young ones. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry in the future. Take care sweet! Love Light Truth Patricia You will be a blessing to all of us here at PS, just like your dad is I can see that!

Michael Jordan August 21, 2008 at 9:18 PM Thats my girl - we got the father daughter tag team going on now - i am so excited about this and can't believe that we didn't think of it sooner. Everyone this is my oldest daughter Sarah who I am so proud of - You will love her for she is a beautiful soul