Stormy Days

You, strong sun that soars, crumbles down tonight, 
A stormy day arrives at your bright face, 
The sunny rays are nowhere in my sight, 
A gust of silent air consumes the space. 

No light shines in this room. Forever drain, 
The world cools when the sun is blocked by guise,
Your clouds cry and pour and enshroud with rain, 
I will continue life drenched in your cries.

I'll never run away when you're in tears, 
My orbit will revolve for you, my sun, 
Your presence still remains in all the fears, 
My light, you will forever be the one. 

I'll wait till time can tell when you might shine, 
You’re still the sun when you are not divine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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artly Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 7:26 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 12:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Hind Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Wow, very lovely - the end is so true and meaningful
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