Storms of Life

In bleak of darkness

Standing alone in the world

Hope is still alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/30/2010 11:25:00 PM
VERY TRUE DEAR ! HOPE KEEPS US ALIVE ! -Raj
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:16:00 PM
Awesome write my friend....Larry
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:13:00 PM
ooh, this is great, love it! ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/4/2010 1:02:00 AM
Very thought provoking!
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Date: 6/2/2010 7:52:00 AM
a very uplifting haiku Carolyn! thank you again for your comments :)
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:35:00 AM
yes hope...hope that all will be as it should be! If you have an Eve in you it would be so nice to see a contest entry from you in our Adam & Eve contest I have the Eve's Linda Marie the Adam's...you read one of the Adam's poems and reply like his "wife?" Light & Love
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Date: 5/27/2010 6:31:00 PM
Thnx for posting comments to my piece...it means a lot to me, Carolyn...Jimmy
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Date: 5/27/2010 2:56:00 PM
wonderful outlook, Carolyn, and thanks for your sweet comment. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:28:00 AM
it sure is Carolyn, awesome love it harry
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:11:00 PM
This is excellent. I can see the image of the storm quite clearly. Hope is always alive. Great job! Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:37:00 AM
Hardly unacceptable for hope to not be alive, Carolyn. Love your thoughts. Awesome, words. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/19/2010 1:26:00 PM
nice to hear from you Carolyn,..this is an aesome write,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:26:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Carolyn, if we don't have hope we have nothing > thank you for your kind comments >> James
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Date: 5/15/2010 8:46:00 PM
Great Haiku. You gotta keep hope alive! :-)
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Date: 5/10/2010 8:25:00 AM
Awesome Senryu, Carolyn! Hope must be alive all the time! Thank you for your comments and have a great week ahead. ....Gert
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Date: 5/7/2010 5:42:00 PM
Amen! What a wonderful message conveyed in just three lines. Keep that hope alive! Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem and for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 5/7/2010 5:55:00 AM
Great Haiku Carolyn and resounding last line to compliment your title... awesome as usual.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/5/2010 6:18:00 PM
WOW, SUCH STRONG LINES IN A HAIKU, ENJOYED
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:42:00 AM
Great write about the picture...I can feel the Hope coming through...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:01:00 AM
Very uplifting haiku, Carolyn. It reminds me of the message in the movie "Hope Floats," one of my favorites because it shows how a woman was able to rebuild her life against all odds. Anyone who suffers from loneliness or despair should see that movie. Hopefully, your poem will help other readers weather the "Storms of Life." Well done! Love, CD
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:26:00 AM
Great Poem Carolyn.....and thanks for your many comments....Larry
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:46:00 PM
Nicely expressed. Good luck
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Date: 5/4/2010 2:38:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Carolyn. It truly captures the strength that can come from standing alone and facing adversity.
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Date: 5/4/2010 12:56:00 PM
Such an inspirational look at this wonderful photo! Well done! good luck in Raul's contest, Carolyn! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/4/2010 12:35:00 PM
Carolyn - a wonderful haiku - sums up my life at the moment. Love Janette
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