Storm's Loss

Storm's Loss

                         reluctant raindrop
           mountain treasure of pulsing thunder cloud
                   grabbed by thoughtless winds

                             so he fell
                      from my aching arms
                           into her life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Moreno Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 2:08 AM
Love the first line, it speaks volumes to me, thanks for stopping by and blessing me with a comment.
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September 17, 2013 at 4:24 PM
glad you liked it--and especially happy to hear from you!
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