Eddee Shaz Poet Dodoitsu

Stormes

es  2.2.2011 

 

                                Strong wind blowing through huge trees

                                     Branches cracking and falling

                                    Loud thunder cracking,booming 
                         
                                          Lighting blinding light

                               Lighting hits trees makes tooth picks

                                 Splintered wood flies like shrapnel

                                  Smoking, steaming, burning wood 

                                           Lightning death for trees

                                   Thunder Echos shakes the ground

                                    Thunder gods smiling downward

                                    Sounds of distant thunder nears

                                       young trees love big storms

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Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2011 at 12:15 AM Hey, like that string haiku but with dodoitsu. YOu could start a new trend here! I enjoyed the read.

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2011 at 11:22 PM stunnnig, edee with vivid metaphors.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette