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Stormes

es 2.2.2011 Strong wind blowing through huge trees Branches cracking and falling Loud thunder cracking,booming Lighting blinding light Lighting hits trees makes tooth picks Splintered wood flies like shrapnel Smoking, steaming, burning wood Lightning death for trees Thunder Echos shakes the ground Thunder gods smiling downward Sounds of distant thunder nears young trees love big storms

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Date: 2/2/2011 12:15:00 AM
Hey, like that string haiku but with dodoitsu. YOu could start a new trend here! I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:22:00 PM
stunnnig, edee with vivid metaphors.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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