Thompson Emate Poet Verse

Storm Within Me

Within me,
A storm awakens,
A stealth part of me,
Twilight does not assuage it,
Hidden night.

Door opens,
I’m ushered through it,
A storm arises,
A recalcitrant darkness,
An echo.


October 30, 2025.
Nette Onclaud,
Pentastitch It Poetry Contest.

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Upasana Banerjee October 31, 2025 at 8:28 PM Beautiful! Especially loved the last line. Congratulations! :) Thompson Emate November 3, 2025 at 5:46 AM Thank you, Upasana. I'm honoured.

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2025 at 11:39 AM Great take on the theme of storm within. Congrats on your win Thompson Emate November 3, 2025 at 5:47 AM Thank you, Andrea. It's an honour.