Storm Within

The clock on the wall is still
My head weighs just  too much
words swirling in my head
Fogs are pouring into my space
Thunder storm striking my comfort shores within my soul
I wish I had a weather girl inside….


Rahy

Feb 3, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations Rahy on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
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February 20, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Rahy, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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February 20, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Rahy, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
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February 6, 2016 at 8:53 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:06 AM
I can relate to this with the dark wintery days that seem to have gone on for months - I want the weather girl inside to sprinkle some sunbeams on our lives ... I can't ever remember such a dull dark January no wonder people suffer from 'sad':-( hugs Jan xx
Hy Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:14 AM
I can't wait for the spring to arrive. The weather girl inside me is hibernating, I guess... Time for some changes... May be I should get a hair cut :) Hugs, Rahy
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