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Storm will pass

Written 23/07/2026 for weekly challenge  Haiku style include word rain
1st go at haiku used sylubus counter so hopefully correct 


Rain came down quickly
Sky stormy black ~ no colour
A rainbow appeared
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 12:54 AM
-The rainbow always fascinates me... a beautiful sight, Dorothy :) - Haiku is my favorite form, love writing and reading them :) - (You wrote this on my birthday, thank you :) - Have a lovely weekend my friend :) - hugs
Gibbons Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 1:21 AM
Morning 🌄 my cherished forever friend 🧡 thank u for your inspiring comment.. I've written ur birthday in my diary 🫂💕 u can teach me on getting better at haiku this was a first but thought it must been crap coz never got anywhere in comp. But u have inspired me today to keep trying .Rainbow fascinates me too 💕🫂 hugs n luv ❤️ have a fab weekend 💖
Croft Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 9:17 PM
love writing haiku, they are short prompt and to the point of an expression. Have a great night.
Gibbons Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 12:43 AM
Hey Karen your great at haiku I'm just learning so love reading yours haiku queen 👸 ✍️ have a blessed weekend friend hugzzzz ❤️‍🩹
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:43 PM
Even in an emotional storm, you can’t see color…arrival of rainbow! 😀
Gibbons Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Kim 🌈🫂
Hind Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 7:59 PM
just beautiful <3
Gibbons Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 2:24 AM
Thank u sweet Paige ❤️🌹
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 8:07 PM
God's great promise. And there is that rainbow again!
Gibbons Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 10:20 PM
Yup a sure sign Andrea God sure keeps His promises to us and reminds us with Rainbows through our walk of life. Thank u for popping in and leaving a sprinkle of love hugssss friend <3
Kitchin Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 3:22 AM
Dorothy, a wonderful poem and imagery, love the rainbow ending.
Gibbons Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 4:04 AM
Thank you tania for encouraging comment. Took me 2 hrs to work out 575 with syllables checker on ere xxx I wss determined id crack it LOL hugs <3
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 5:21 AM
Love the image. Well presented haiku
Gibbons Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 4:05 AM
Aww thank u Alison for your encouraging coment <3 hugss
Scragg Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 2:42 AM
Lovely :-D ... rainbow gifted, spirits lifted xxxxx
Scragg Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 10:37 AM
You're more than welcome to use it :-D xx
Gibbons Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 3:02 AM
Thank u dear natasha " rainbow gifted , spirits lifted " love it pinching it lol but u did create it for me I know this :D hugsss xxx <3
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