Storm Warning In Sky

mimics pain in heart
thunder sounds like your good-bye
storm roars in side me


Cynthia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 30, 2012 at 12:44 AM
The sound of thunder is an ominous one. Good write again.
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August 29, 2012 at 5:22 PM
Hi Cynthia, how are you?? i see the primates hit home every now and than... I'm glad you are feeling it before it approaches,,, stay clear.. no need for rain,,, nice haiku,,, almost jungle like, if you know what i mean.. always~LINDA
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August 29, 2012 at 6:38 PM
Hello Linda, Wrote this one looking at photo of storm clouds, dark and mysterious and I thougt, "What a great Senryu" for how I was feeling at the time. lol I am changing it just a little. Appreciate your comment. Cynthia
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