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Storm Warning In Sky

mimics pain in heart thunder sounds like your good-bye storm roars in side me Cynthia

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Robert Pettit

Date: 8/30/2012 12:44:00 AM

The sound of thunder is an ominous one. Good write again.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2012 5:22:00 PM

Hi Cynthia, how are you?? i see the primates hit home every now and than... I'm glad you are feeling it before it approaches,,, stay clear.. no need for rain,,, nice haiku,,, almost jungle like, if you know what i mean.. always~LINDA

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/29/2012 6:38:00 PM

Hello Linda, Wrote this one looking at photo of storm clouds, dark and mysterious and I thougt, "What a great Senryu" for how I was feeling at the time. lol I am changing it just a little. Appreciate your comment. Cynthia