storm rain ice snow spring

1448 Newly Posted Poem 3-2-26
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~storms~
gathering furies
 wild winds whistle through pine boughs ~
  finches feast on birch seeds

streams of freezing rain
leaves slippery signatures
  finches feast on birch pods

~rain~
pounding winter rains
 bathe the thirsty desert sands ~
  wildflowers bursting

drumbeats of raindrops
 reverb in wind symphony ~
  drip plop splash gurgle

~ice~
thin icy edges
 winter white moustache ~
 platinum hoar frost

thick coats of blue ice
 blanket every barren twig ~
  snow melts winter blinks

~snow~
ribbons of snowflakes
 flow in a gossamer gown ~
  ruby skies crackle

across the smooth ice
 dainty snowflakes pirouette ~
  bare birch boughs applaud
 
~spring~
tumbleweeds rumble
 springtime sprawls across prairies ~
  precious gift of rain

crocus shout greetings
 as snowdrops push through snows ~
  blustery mischief

white plum blossoms laugh
 tickled by wiggling raindrops ~
  gold and grey skies dawn
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Callus Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 4:17 AM
I enjoyed this string of haiku/senryu inspired by winter and spring, Sam. Congratulations on your contest win. Regards // paul
Kauffman Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 3:35 PM
Greetings Paul! What joy to know you enjoyed this winter tale and the coming of spring! Thank you so much! Our fruit trees are in bloom and the mustard has come up in the fields with bright pops of color everywhere! Hope you are well. Sending Spring blessings of joy!!!
Hind Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 1:03 PM
"crocus shout greetings as snowdrops push through snows ~ blustery mischief" love that, :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Hi Paige! Many thanks. Was inspired as I watched a late winter storm roll in then out! Blessings of spring joy to you!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:08 AM
Very nice. I got a kick out of white moustache!! Big congrats on your win
Kauffman Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:48 AM
Hi Andrea! Thank you! Always looking for a new way to paint a picture! Sending you blessings!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 10:15 PM
loved your imagery; especially liked wiggling raindrops. You have such awesome poetic skills :-)
Kauffman Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:46 AM
Morning Sara! Thank you! Had fun with this one! Hugs and blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 1:04 PM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 9:45 AM
Hi Sara! Thank you! It was such fun to create this haiku string! Prayers and blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 5:42 AM
Love the sound of “finches feast on birch seeds.” A lovely sign of Spring that even snow cannot stop!
Kauffman Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Hi Kim! Thank you for your perceptive words - so appreciated! Even though autumn can't stop winter, winter can't stop spring - try as it may. So delighted that you picked up on the role of each season. We have birch trees outside my office window. I love watching the little birds feast on the seed pods all through the winter! Such an inspiration. Hugs and blessings!
Daniels Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 12:44 AM
The relief of spring pushing through comes across confidently, Sam. Lovely imagery with good alliteration. I like this line : “ dainty snowflakes pirouette ~” Best for contest. X
Kauffman Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so much Ghairo! I enjoy writing haiku strings that tell a story and I couldn't think of a better ending for this string of storms and ice than point to the completion of winter's work found in spring. I do love to watch snowflakes dance. Blessings to you!
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 4:32 PM
Some very descriptive lines penned in these Haiku. So many different ways to tells us about the seasons and what to expect. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 11:40 AM
Hi Sara! Thank you so much for your perceptive and delightful feedback. I thought it would be fun to use a haiku string to tell winter's story! So glad you enjoyed it. Take care. Hugs and blessings!
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