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Everlasting love a passion,
today deemed a trite old fashion,
love to nonconform.

Here we are, oh so evident
holding hands like a dissident,
in a thunderstorm.

© Harry J Horsman  2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:02 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Harry. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 5:14 AM
oh yes to this harry.. congrats on your win!..:) huggs
Allen Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:25 PM
Inspite of all the I's in the world the eternal we does still exist. I like it, I love it. I want some more of it. Huggs TLee
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:02 PM
YES< I remember this one!!! Congrats, Harry. You rock.
Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:48 PM
"dissadent in a thunderstorm..thats a great line. congrats. BG
Taylor Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 6:51 PM
Congrats on your win, Harry. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
May Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 5:36 PM
congrats on your win Harry..Joseph
May Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 5:35 PM
congrats on your win Harry..Joseph
Squyres Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:31 PM
I find this rather romantic....I prefer old-fashion to disposible relationships. Congrats on your win !!
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Very nice Tail Rhyme Harry.Congrats on your win.
Burch Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your win 'arry!!! Well Done!! big hugs, love ya deb
Williams Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Harry, congrats on your win..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Congrats on your win arry xx
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 1:58 PM
It's a fantastic job done well. Loved always, bl
Salama  Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 7:34 PM
I love the strong words in this poem Harry! Excellent! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Cool one, Harry. like a dissident in a thunderstorm, that sure strikes a chord!!!
Wesley Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 7:00 PM
Wonder what makes relationships so tenuous these days, seems we put the best foot forward in courtship then revert to who we really are when married. Love the rhyme scheme you have here, it's the first thing I noticed. Nice Harry, I enjoyed!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Like this arry very nice, yep a good un xx
Burch Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Fabulous 'arry!! love it! big hugs, deb
Fitzgerald Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Great write Harry , much enjoyed , Declan ...
Williams Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Harry nice image, love it..David
K. Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Ah, how true harry! I love what you say here and actually I am one who truly admires those couple who weather the storms and whose love seems to truly last forever against the odds :) Hopefully more couples would have this and not give up so easily....again, so much said in so few lines, enjoyed this!
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