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Storm of Love

In the storm of love conflicting emotions rage. Soft sensual touch. My body resists. No sanctuary in you. Spouse of another. 21/07/2017

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/27/2017 6:23:00 AM

Wisdom doesn't often win over passion Only if truly virtuous. Congratulations on a fine win. Hugs, SuZ

Jean Murray
Date: 8/27/2017 6:33:00 AM

That's true Suzanne. Such a powerful urge to resist. Lovely to see you this morning.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/16/2017 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations Jean :)

Jean Murray
Date: 8/16/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2017 7:59:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win, Jean ~*

Jean Murray
Date: 8/15/2017 11:22:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/22/2017 4:08:00 AM

Hi Jean , Yes it is the most powerful and delightful feeling in the world but clean slate for both is so important for long term loving hugging kissing washing dishes together etc :))))))hugs

Niall Fulham
Date: 7/22/2017 8:08:00 AM

haha , more time for hugging :))))hugs

Jean Murray
Date: 7/22/2017 6:48:00 AM

I've a dishwasher Niall. Is that good or bad for my prospects?

Silent One

Date: 7/21/2017 3:18:00 PM

Oooh, adultery is not a good idea.. well resisted Jean..

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Silent. It was hard.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/21/2017 3:08:00 PM

Very well done, Jean, a spouse of another shouldn't be trusted... ~*

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 3:15:00 PM

My spouse did it to me Eve. I know how it feels. I would never do it to another.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/21/2017 2:25:00 PM

well said, jean! i love the sanctuary line - perfect!

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Ilene. For some reason I cannot explain, I feel compelled to use all the words offered in Broken Wings contests, not just one. I think the words embed in my brain then spill out again.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/21/2017 1:49:00 PM

- Wait for the soft winds ... the storm is brutal and not to rely on, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 2:01:00 PM

I will take your advice and drop anchor Anne-Lise.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/21/2017 11:13:00 AM

No matter how good they feel we must resist the temptation. Luckily I have no spouse...lol

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 11:59:00 AM

And by the way...that makes two of us.xx

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 11:53:00 AM

Why do you and Art never take me serious I wonder??

Jan Allison

Date: 7/21/2017 9:41:00 AM

It happens all too often jean... finding a truthful loyal man can be very hard ... I am fed up of being lied to but not in love thankfully:-( hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 11:57:00 AM

It's funny how a poem can end up revelling what's on one's mind, even though I did not start out with that intension at all Jan. As far as being lied to in affairs of the heart....I could write a book!

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/21/2017 9:33:00 AM

That would be a storm of epic disaster, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 11:54:00 AM

Which might be the makings of an epic poem??

Lin Lane

Date: 7/21/2017 9:32:00 AM

Uh oh, Jean. The heart sometimes leaps before it looks. Great Senryu.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Lin.