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Storm of Love

In the storm of love
     conflicting emotions rage.
             Soft sensual touch.

My body resists.
     No sanctuary in you.
             Spouse of another.




21/07/2017

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Suzanne Delaney

August 27, 2017 at 6:23 AM

Wisdom doesn't often win over passion Only if truly virtuous. Congratulations on a fine win. Hugs, SuZ

Jean Murray

August 27, 2017 at 6:33 AM

That's true Suzanne. Such a powerful urge to resist. Lovely to see you this morning.

Heidi Sands

August 16, 2017 at 8:03 AM

Congratulations Jean :)

Jean Murray

August 16, 2017 at 11:22 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Eve Roper

August 15, 2017 at 7:59 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win, Jean ~*

Jean Murray

August 15, 2017 at 11:22 PM

Thank you Eve.

Silent One

July 21, 2017 at 3:18 PM

Oooh, adultery is not a good idea.. well resisted Jean..

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 3:38 PM

Thank you Silent. It was hard.

Eve Roper

July 21, 2017 at 3:08 PM

Very well done, Jean, a spouse of another shouldn't be trusted... ~*

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 3:15 PM

My spouse did it to me Eve. I know how it feels. I would never do it to another.

Ilene Bauer

July 21, 2017 at 2:25 PM

well said, jean! i love the sanctuary line - perfect!

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 2:31 PM

Thank you Ilene. For some reason I cannot explain, I feel compelled to use all the words offered in Broken Wings contests, not just one. I think the words embed in my brain then spill out again.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 21, 2017 at 1:49 PM

- Wait for the soft winds ... the storm is brutal and not to rely on, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 2:01 PM

I will take your advice and drop anchor Anne-Lise.

Tim Smith

July 21, 2017 at 11:13 AM

No matter how good they feel we must resist the temptation. Luckily I have no spouse...lol

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 11:59 AM

And by the way...that makes two of us.xx

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 11:53 AM

Why do you and Art never take me serious I wonder??

Jan Allison

July 21, 2017 at 9:41 AM

It happens all too often jean... finding a truthful loyal man can be very hard ... I am fed up of being lied to but not in love thankfully:-( hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

July 21, 2017 at 11:57 AM

It's funny how a poem can end up revelling what's on one's mind, even though I did not start out with that intension at all Jan. As far as being lied to in affairs of the heart....I could write a book!