Storm of Afflatus

in the glint of dew strewn mesmeric meadow, on the pearl laced 
waves of moon splashed sea I look for rhyme when imageries blow
on mindscape raising dust of emotion turning into storm of afflatus
making me a poet profound

see the miasma
rise from my blooming garden…
birds fly on lyric 

June 12, 2020
Prose word count : 40
Haiku syllable count : 5/7/5
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Rhymes And Reasons
Sponsor : Line Gauthier
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Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 2:29 PM
A huge huge congratulations on your high placement. You deserve it.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:26 PM
lush with imagery. Love the KU!
Roper Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 9:54 PM
Well said, Subimal, congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:32 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Very nice Subimal :)
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