Storm In a Butterfly House

It rained for 3 days,
drenching torrents plunged down
as if a dam had breached.
There was some local flooding
but by and large only minor damage
a lot of litter and flotsam though
‘sky wreckage’ some called it.

The butterfly house was swamped,
its netted walls were ripped ragged
by broken tree limbs,
the seams in the wooden roof
split apart and a wild,
wind-riding rain rode in.

Purple Admirals were beaten down
by the gusting blows,
then drowned.
Painted Ladies were murdered
their mangled decorative forms
no longer cosmetics.
Longwings no longer flew
but in death, swam limply
in the splashing puddles.
A disarray of broken wings
carpeted the deluged floor.

Somewhere in this caged house
sodden chrysalids sway upon fractured twigs;
eventually there will be fluttering wings,
but not here in this ruined shelter
were the air still drips wetly
onto unreceiving
and unmoving antennae.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kaufman Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Hey Eric, A very strong and powerful piece here. I loved the last paragraph of hope and rebirth.
Ashford Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Thank you Nancy for this warm review. It's much appreciated.
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