Storm Clouds

storm clouds threaten rain breeze moves them swiftly southward drought unabated written June 18, 2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/18/2021 8:36:00 PM

I adore your haikus since they are both creative and genuine. I'm sorry to learn that your location is not friendly to raindrops. Have a blessed evening

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/18/2021 8:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Lasaad. As I write, we are having a terrible lightning and thunder storm. The one we missed this afternoon.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/18/2021 7:51:00 PM

I feel your pain. We too are in a terrible drought. It is so disheartening. Good job putting this into such a concise piece of work, it says it all perfectly :'(

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/18/2021 7:55:00 PM

Thanks, BJ. Was writing in the park in my car, expecting a downpour, but got a few sprinkles and the stormclouds moved on. We need the rain, too.