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Storm Chaser

storm chaser cotton clouds billow feisty winds in frisky moods ~ thunder approaches lightning bolts run wild leaves flash in silver storm hues ~ driving rain thrashes sunbeams chase the storm summer stretches 'cross calm skies ~ storm makes quick get away 7/20/21

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Date: 8/3/2021 3:59:00 PM
"feisty winds in frisky moods", Very nicely done... soup mail
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2021 2:21:00 PM
Hi Joseph! Thank you so much! I do so love watching a storm brewing, exploding in power then sneaking away! It is a ritual I never tire of especially in the summer. All the best!
Date: 7/28/2021 1:02:00 PM
Very delightful imagery and personification, Sam. Luckily storms do not last forever! Regards // paul
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2021 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Storms do so lend themselves to vivid imagery and seem to have a personality all their own! Always wonderful to hear from you! Blessings of clear skies to you!
Date: 7/26/2021 7:34:00 PM
Sam, back to congratulate you on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim! So appreciate your congratulatory note. Sending you the blessings of a sunny, summer day!
Date: 7/26/2021 5:42:00 PM
What a cool personification of nature. I really enjoyed this haiku sequence.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! Really enjoyed thinking about a summer storm in these terms with this vision. So glad you shared in that "friskiness!" Alway fun to have a friend to watch a storm with on a summer day!
Date: 7/26/2021 11:07:00 AM
Splendid write! Great imagery. You captured storm very well!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 9:12:00 AM
Hi Rama! Sending you my gratitude for your delightful note! Thank you. I think haiku is a great format to capture the drama of a summer storm. Sending you blessings of sunshine!
Date: 7/26/2021 10:50:00 AM
I felt that I truly experienced the storm though your lovely, dramatic imagery, Sam. Loved that last line. Blessings :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 9:10:00 AM
When writing this haiku sequence I thought about the summer storms I have experienced especially in the midwest and east coast! Being in the midwest you have great firsthand with thunder and lightning storms! That makes your delightful message even more meaningful! Thank you so much for your visit. Sun's out ready to make a sunny day! Blessings my friend! :)"
Date: 7/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Hello Sam, You've caught the storm's turmoil with precision + creativity with sunbeam pursuit. So well done. Cheers Brian
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 8:59:00 AM
Hi Brian! Thank you so much for your delightful, and very encouraging, message! It was so much fun to explore the "feisty" and "frisky" personality of an oncoming storm with the sun in hot pursuit like all of those storm chasers we hear about on the news. All the best. Sending "cheers" back to you!
Date: 7/26/2021 1:31:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 8:53:00 AM
Hi Chris! Thank yuou so much for your delightful response to this haiku string! Seems this form really lends itself to describing the short, powerful, nature of a summer storm. Blessings of blue skies to you!
Date: 7/25/2021 6:27:00 PM
Great imagery in this small verses, Sam. Soup mail. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/27/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Eve! I am finding I really enjoy the discipline and creativity in haiku. Loved the opportunity to create a new haiku sequence!
Date: 7/25/2021 12:50:00 PM
Ahh... the beauty of nature, even in storm... with lightning and thunder. I remember when I was in Missouri driving in the storm, seeing lightning and hearing thunder.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/26/2021 11:29:00 AM
Agreed! Mother Nature's furious power seen in a summer storm! Storms in the mid-west and East Coast are truly awesome to behold. Have driven through several at night on the east coast. Quite an experience! Hope you are will. Take care. Sending you blessings!
Date: 7/24/2021 12:58:00 PM
Love the imagery Sam, summer storms are awesome to see. Over Fork Over, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/26/2021 11:26:00 AM
Hi Tom! Thank you. There is something unique about summer storms - awesome light shows. We could get a summer storm either today or tomorrow. We are hoping for a little rain but no dry lightning! Have a great week. Over Fork Over!
Date: 7/24/2021 12:26:00 PM
A delightful, haiku sequence, Sam! Blessings, Kim M
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/26/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much Kim. Sometimes summer storms have a sense of mischief about them in their power! All the best my friend. Blessings to you.
Date: 7/24/2021 10:32:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Sam. Well done! :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/26/2021 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. It is an amazing experience to watch a summer storm. Looks like we may experience one here ove thenext couple of days. We don't get many but they are spectacular. We are praying there wonb't be any dry lightning! Blessings to you!

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