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Storm

(Another childhood poem...quite old!)

Grey-black clouds above me roll
with a loud and fearsome tone --
huge dark boulders of the skies,
carved from granite-stone.
Forked bolts of lightning flash,
points just above my head --
sparks struck from the clash
of spears whose owners
long are dead. Glistening 
drops of moisture fall
with a silence-shattering sound--
drops that are tears of souls 
whose fears must, and 
ever shall, abound.
The piercing wind-sound of the fury
screams an ultimatum in my ear --
it is insane shrieking from a witch
who fills mankind with fear.
Shaken by this awful show
of mighty forces in the night,
I, in haste, with head held low,
retreat within in fright.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pierre-Alexander Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 6:05 PM
You should have been an History Teacher...lol am sure gonna remember this one.
Watkins Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 9:13 AM
The rhyming scheme and the stormy imagery are a great combination; I really enjoyed reading this. Nice job! ~Beth
Longfall Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 12:34 PM
An exceptional write! Very smooth in reading with excellent visuals.
Dufresne Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:24 PM
I absolutely enjoyed this free verse which is what I think a true example of free verse should be. (never could master it) very well done Leo with an exceptional command of the imagery and imagination making for a great poem.
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