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Storm

storm branches sway smiling yellow leaves tap dance mosaic sky glows light wind upon barks wet eyes gliding hope

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/25/2023 2:43:00 PM

Such lovely imagery Sabrina. Congratulations! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/25/2023 6:45:00 AM

Dear Sabrina, this is one of the most beautiful ninettes I’ve read for this contest, so gorgeous and so well written: i especially love the line “ yellow leaves tap dance .. mosaic sky glows“ unique and stunning. Congratulations on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:42:00 PM

I enjoyed your imagery. If you had centered this, I would have given it second place.

Sabrina Millicent
Date: 11/24/2023 2:09:00 AM

Hi Andrea, I didn’t know you could centre on soup. I now know thanks to a friend. My apologies for not reading your guidelines as well. Thanks for the positive feedback.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/15/2023 10:56:00 AM

Some find beauty in a storm. Perhaps you too

Sabrina Millicent
Date: 11/15/2023 12:05:00 PM

Thank you for reading. I find beauty in the aftermath of natures storm as sorrow and joy hold hands.