Storm

storm 
branches 
sway smiling 
yellow leaves tap dance  
mosaic sky glows 
light wind upon barks 
wet eyes 
gliding   
hope
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Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Such lovely imagery Sabrina. Congratulations! :)
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Dear Sabrina, this is one of the most beautiful ninettes I’ve read for this contest, so gorgeous and so well written: i especially love the line “ yellow leaves tap dance .. mosaic sky glows“ unique and stunning. Congratulations on your win
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:42 PM
I enjoyed your imagery. If you had centered this, I would have given it second place.
Millicent  Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:09 AM
Hi Andrea, I didn’t know you could centre on soup. I now know thanks to a friend. My apologies for not reading your guidelines as well. Thanks for the positive feedback.
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